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xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 21:57:09, 来源:未名交友
标题: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness

李谷一的“乡恋”从词、曲和演唱都很完美。所以,我重填词就画蛇添足了。不过有时即兴的创作只为一些乐趣;再说也能表达一些我的经历:我总是费了很多口舌解释我是哪儿的人,有时我想偷懒,直接说我的老家就是我现在生活的城市,对方立马说那你怎么不说XX话,我没辙,又一番解释-----懒还真偷不了。 

父亲的老家是沿海的一个小山村,那盛产蜜桔。父亲说他小时候的梦想就是想看看山那边的世界,有趣的是那时一个英国水手从外边的世界走进了那个闭塞的山村:他在那儿教英文。后来父亲真的走到了外边。父亲说,每次离开家乡,祖父会带他拜村口的石人---他们叫他“吉大人”,父亲的家乡话中,桔=吉。我从未去过的老家早已淹没在人工的水库下 

Home-Sick

1.

It’s a long story to tell

If you ask where I am from

Eastern village or western mountain?

Northern big city or southern small old town?* 

But what I can tell you about

I am from China, I say it aloud

Chinese words are characters

“Four sounds” sound like tunes of music** 

East or west, home is best

North or south, confusing dialects

But our soil is irrigated

By Yellow River and Yangzi River 

2.

Ancestors ever lived in this land

Toiled but dreamed in this land

This descended ancestors’ land

Surly is my home town 

East or west, home is best

I wish no longer drift

Ancestors’ ever land

Surly is my home town 

East or west, home is best

I wish no longer drift

Ancestors’ ever land

Surly is my home town 

laaaa

*dad’s hometown is in the East, mom’s the West, I was born in the North, now I live in the South

** a foreign friend of mine told me he ever use “la” to memorize “1st sound”



※ 最后修改者:xdjdmc, 修改于:2007-07-06 22:33:25 ※
※ 来源:Unknown Friends - 未名交友 http://us.jiaoyou8.com ※
unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:03:21, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness

you are an amazing girl that i believe a lot of people will like you. if getting a chance, please come visit Los Angeles to know a lot of friends in here.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 21:57:09, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:[original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness
:
:

李谷一的“乡恋”从词、曲和演唱都很完美。所以,我重填词就画蛇添足了。不过有时即兴的创作只为一些乐趣;再说也能表达一些我的经历:我总是费了很多口舌解释我是哪儿的人,有时我想偷懒,直接说我的老家就是我现在生活的城市,对方立马说那你怎么不说XX话,我没辙,又一番解释-----懒还真偷不了。 

父亲的老家是沿海的一个小山村,那盛产蜜桔。父亲说他小时候的梦想就是想看看山那边的世界,有趣的是那时一个英国水手从外边的世界走进了那个闭塞的山村:他在那儿教英文。后来父亲真的走到了外边。父亲说,每次离开家乡,祖父会带他拜村口的石人---他们叫他“吉大人”,父亲的家乡话中,桔=吉。我从未去过的老家早已淹没在人工的水库下 

Home-Sick

1.

It’s a long story to tell

If you ask where I am from

Eastern village or western mountain?

Northern big city or southern small old town?* 

But what I can tell you about

I am from China, I say it aloud

Chinese words are characters

“Four sounds” sound like tunes of music** 

East or west, home is best

North or south, confusing dialects

But our soil is irrigated

By Yellow River and Yangzi River 

2.

Ancestors ever lived in this land

Toiled but dreamed in this land

This descended ancestors’ land

Surly is my home town 

East or west, home is best

I wish no longer drift

Ancestors’ ever land

Surly is my home town 

East or west, home is best

I wish no longer drift

Ancestors’ ever land

Surly is my home town 

laaaa

*dad’s hometown is in the East, mom’s the West, I was born in the North, now I live in the South

** a foreign friend of mine told me he ever use “la” to memorize “1st sound”



※ 最后修改者:unavail, 修改于:2007-07-06 22:51:59 ※
※ 来源:Unknown Friends - 未名交友 http://us.jiaoyou8.com ※

xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:15:18, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness

thank you so much. it would be my great pleasure and honor to meet friends there, including you. i think i will someday. actually it's your messege yesterday about that we should paste more Chinese songs here gave me the inspirations. and when talking about hometown, it came upon to my mind this song: xianglian, which i love much

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:03:21, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness
:
:

you are an amazing girl that i believe a lot of people will like you. if getting a chance, please come visit Los Angeles to know a lot of friends in here.



※ 来源:Unknown Friends - 未名交友 http://us.jiaoyou8.com ※
unavail ( 男 , 51 )
地区: 美国, 加州
作者: unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:30:45, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness

this is great. please do feel free to post your favorites in this forum as this is yours, ours, and everyone's forum that needs everyone's enjoyable participation. also, hopefully you will meet more professional friends later on to help you/us grow professionally in verse writing, song, music appreciation, etc. thanks, bless, and have a great weekend to you and to everyone on the forum, and thanks to jiaoyou8' generous sponsorship for letting us use this website.

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:15:18, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness
:
:

thank you so much. it would be my great pleasure and honor to meet friends there, including you. i think i will someday. actually it's your messege yesterday about that we should paste more Chinese songs here gave me the inspirations. and when talking about hometown, it came upon to my mind this song: xianglian, which i love much



※ 最后修改者:unavail, 修改于:2007-07-07 10:24:43 ※
※ 来源:Unknown Friends - 未名交友 http://us.jiaoyou8.com ※
xdjdmc ( 女 , 57 )
地区: 中国大陆, 江苏
作者: xdjdmc, 俱乐部:醉是音乐 [引文评论] [评论
时间: 2007-07-06 22:33:25, 来源:未名交友
标题: Re: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness

thank you and all friends.nice a day!

【 --------------------原文-------------------- 】
: 作者:unavail, 俱乐部:醉是音乐
: 日期:2007-07-06 22:30:45, 来源:未名交友
: 标题:Re: [original lyric] 画蛇添个足:Home Sickness
:
: this is great. please do feel free to post your favorites in this forum as this is yours, ours, and everyone's forum that needs everyone's enjoyable participation. also, hopefully you will meet more professional friends later on to help us grow professionally in verse writing, song, music appreciation, etc. thanks, bless, and have a great weekend to you and to everyone on the forum, and thanks to jiaoyou8' generous sponsorship for letting us use this website.



※ 来源:Unknown Friends - 未名交友 http://us.jiaoyou8.com ※
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